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Losing all perspective!

Too nose-deep in these calendars...

See what you think of this!





I'm trying to sort of half-way match the zany graphic zen Ursula's got going on. Did I get even partway there???

(Er, the black line is the trimline - the white and then gray borders are just leftover from the screenshot)

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wynnsfolly
Jul. 14th, 2007 12:36 am (UTC)
when will the calendar & soaps be ready for orders?
ellenmillion
Jul. 14th, 2007 12:45 am (UTC)
Oof - probably not for about a month! I've got the fair coming up Aug 3-11 and I really want to have both on hand for that event... online sales will immediately follow that. (The soap, in particular, I am pretty sure I haven't ordered enough of, so I want to have what I can to sell at the fair, and then order more to fill the online rush of them.)

celticwren
Jul. 14th, 2007 12:59 am (UTC)
I like it, it reminds me a bit of native American stuff, perhaps that is the red ziggy line talking? :) The only thing I think needs to be done is to move that one corner away from the trim line, so you don't have it chopped off. or you could rotate it a bit more upright.
ursulav
Jul. 14th, 2007 02:42 am (UTC)
Looks good to me! The only thing I could think of altering is the plain white background--might be snazzy in black or something. But white works fine, too!
pers1stence
Jul. 14th, 2007 02:46 am (UTC)
I like that it's got lots of white space and not too cluttered.

tweaks -- possibly enlarge the footnoted/asterisked text at the bottom left, although that's a judgment call, since i can't see it at proportionate size.

am not wild about the red zigzag under the red text box. seems a little too much, but that's just me.
pers1stence
Jul. 14th, 2007 02:48 am (UTC)
err...bottom right, not bottom left...
pers1stence
Jul. 14th, 2007 02:48 am (UTC)
also I find line 2 and 3 of the text box a little hard to read. the font is fun, but at this scale at least, it's hard to read. if the final product is significantly larger, readability is likely much better. might be worth a few opinions from folks who can view it in person.
metasilk
Jul. 14th, 2007 03:05 am (UTC)
Er, yeah, I'll probably buy it...

*laugh* hardly a surprise
rendergirl
Jul. 14th, 2007 04:50 am (UTC)
That's cute!
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