Gah.

Apr. 24th, 2006 at 2:49 PM

I dunno if I like this or not.

Also, if anyone would like to lend me fresh eyes, I need a few folks to eyeball my new site and tell me what I'm missing...

Edit to add:

How about this one?

or alternately:

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ellenmillion

Apr. 24th, 2006 11:42 pm (UTC)

http://news.livejournal.com/91919.html

Reading through the first time, I thought there was a call for test ads, but it looks like they're only looking for ads FOR LJ right now. At any rate, I'll probably buy some adspace if rates are reasonable - I don't see anything about that yet. There's a community, too: http://community.livejournal.com/lj_ads/

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terrellztoonz

Apr. 24th, 2006 11:17 pm (UTC)

The T-shirt ad is very well done and I would go with the 1st e-zine ad

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ciri

Apr. 24th, 2006 11:42 pm (UTC)

nitpicks: you need serial commas (after "cards" and "services" on the T-shirt ad and after "artists" and "galleries" on the zine ads). No comma after "monthly". It should be "T-shirt". Also, it sounds odd to say "More than" right after "and more". You're also kind of saying you have more than 100 printing services and resources as well. What kind of resources are they, btw? It sounds awkward.

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waltzingdog

Apr. 25th, 2006 01:55 am (UTC)

How about something like "Printing Services and Resources for over 100 artists and growing..." ?

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ciri

Apr. 25th, 2006 02:06 am (UTC)

But that makes it sound like the printing services and resources are only for the 100 artists featured on EMG, which isn't true.

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tigerpixieart

Apr. 25th, 2006 12:23 am (UTC)

Hey! It's me and my Pookie Bear!! How cool!! :D

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autumngrove

Apr. 25th, 2006 01:59 am (UTC)

Of the three I like the second and the third one...the second one shows what you do and the third is catchy and gets your attention.

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anotherdream

Apr. 25th, 2006 08:16 am (UTC)

I like the latter zine ad - the little "we're not always this pink"- blurb gives me a chuckle, it's something I'd like to click as an ad, even. :)

You can email lj_ads@livejournal.com to ask about their rates and all that stuff, by the way. I don't think they have that information anywhere public at this time. (You've probably seen the ad guidelines.)

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